They Danced Together Yet Alone

by Kymber
27 comments

They danced together yet alone
With bruises on her face
And hatred in his pace
It was love that could not be regrown
The romance ended with a moan
She tried to make it last
But they were both miscast
They danced together yet alone

©2017 booomcha.com
Kymber Hawke

27 comments

loladiamond01 May 29, 2017 - 11:06 am

Great poem 🙂

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RosemaryMarie May 29, 2017 - 7:37 pm

Thank you, Jowita. 🙂

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Marjorie F Watts May 29, 2017 - 11:20 am

Time to add poet to your resume!! It is so sad, and also wonderful! ♥

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RosemaryMarie May 29, 2017 - 7:37 pm

Thank you, Marj. <3

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twinsimskeletons May 29, 2017 - 4:21 pm

Beautiful!

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RosemaryMarie May 29, 2017 - 7:39 pm

Thank you so much 🙂

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freja64 May 29, 2017 - 4:49 pm

Sounds like a tango… Very intense poem.

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RosemaryMarie May 29, 2017 - 7:40 pm

Thank you very much. <3

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joliesattic May 29, 2017 - 11:52 pm

Well done but sad.

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RosemaryMarie May 30, 2017 - 8:30 am

Thank you, Jolie.

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nikada777 May 30, 2017 - 11:45 pm

Salsa when u sad or sing. Me buy a new lamp evry time. Yea this blog is unik

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RosemaryMarie May 31, 2017 - 9:49 am

Thank you so much 🙂

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hafuhga June 1, 2017 - 3:07 pm

Sad but beautiful!

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RosemaryMarie June 1, 2017 - 8:11 pm

Thank you so much. 🙂

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Myra- watercolor and lettering artist June 2, 2017 - 10:05 pm

Interesting. I want to know more.

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RosemaryMarie June 2, 2017 - 11:22 pm

Thank you. 🙂 That’s a good point.

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A traveler in search of an anchor June 7, 2017 - 10:19 pm

Impressive and visual. Thank you

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RosemaryMarie June 8, 2017 - 11:05 am

Thank you so very much.

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kumudsingh June 23, 2017 - 8:08 am

Oh god!!! I remember 3rd of may,2016 when we danced together for the last time, it was really painful leaving you and New York!!!
Things can happen with anyone!! But I don’t want people to suffer from it!!
Wonderful poem 😢

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RosemaryMarie June 23, 2017 - 10:44 am

Thank you very much.

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kumudsingh June 23, 2017 - 10:54 am

Your most welcome!!!

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sparklingemotions.com August 21, 2017 - 1:16 am

Old post but the essence is still fresh. Loved reading it.👌

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RosemaryMarie August 21, 2017 - 8:46 am

Thank you so much. I appreciate it. 🙂

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sparklingemotions.com August 21, 2017 - 8:47 am

Welcome.💕💕❤

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texaslawstudent March 22, 2018 - 8:28 pm

Very powerful!!

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RosemaryMarie March 25, 2018 - 5:08 pm

Thank you very much. 🙂

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texaslawstudent March 25, 2018 - 6:18 pm

🙂

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