They danced together yet alone With bruises on her face And hatred in his pace It was love that could not be regrown The romance ended with a moan She tried to make it last But they were both miscast They danced together yet alone
This is very interesting poem I often think about that, it some way makes me think.. this picture above this poem, if you have made this you are really skillful 👍
I still think about this poem, have not found yet that I look for though I have read this over 30 times. I love challenges and secrets!! Thinking continues until I find it.
Oh god!!! I remember 3rd of may,2016 when we danced together for the last time, it was really painful leaving you and New York!!!
Things can happen with anyone!! But I don’t want people to suffer from it!!
Wonderful poem 😢
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This is very interesting poem I often think about that, it some way makes me think.. this picture above this poem, if you have made this you are really skillful 👍
I wish I could make a picture like that. lol Whoever did it is very talented. I think it’s from pixabay.com.
Okay, it’s really good 👍
I agree. 🙂
I still think about this poem, have not found yet that I look for though I have read this over 30 times. I love challenges and secrets!! Thinking continues until I find it.
30 times! Now that is dedication! 🙂 Thank you so much.🌸
Poems will never die😊
🌸🌸 That’s lovely!
I have thought about this poem many times.. ‘She tried to make it last’ oh how much I appreciate this girl🌺
Thank you, Jean. I haven’t read this one in a very long time. 🌺 I really appreciate your encouragement!
This one makes many thinking, at least should make ”They danced together yet alone”…
Well done
Powerful and well done!
Thank you so much, Cindy. xo
Poignant and very sad. Well done.
Thank you so much, Rowena.
Very powerful!!
Thank you very much. 🙂
🙂
Welcome.💕💕❤
Old post but the essence is still fresh. Loved reading it.👌
Thank you so much. I appreciate it. 🙂
Oh god!!! I remember 3rd of may,2016 when we danced together for the last time, it was really painful leaving you and New York!!!
Things can happen with anyone!! But I don’t want people to suffer from it!!
Wonderful poem 😢
Thank you very much.
Your most welcome!!!
Impressive and visual. Thank you
Thank you so very much.
Interesting. I want to know more.
Thank you. 🙂 That’s a good point.
Sad but beautiful!
Thank you so much. 🙂
Salsa when u sad or sing. Me buy a new lamp evry time. Yea this blog is unik
Thank you so much 🙂
Well done but sad.
Thank you, Jolie.
Sounds like a tango… Very intense poem.
Thank you very much. <3
Beautiful!
Thank you so much 🙂
Time to add poet to your resume!! It is so sad, and also wonderful! ♥
Thank you, Marj. <3
Great poem 🙂
Thank you, Jowita. 🙂