You Couldn’t Be More Wrong

by Kymber @booomcha
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You said I regret leaving you

But you couldn’t be more wrong

Because the moment I was free of you

My heart filled with song

A feeling washed over me

You could say it was relief

When I no longer had to please you

Or care what you think

Leaving was the best thing

And now I’m really smiling

Because I traded in the jack-ass

For a strong, and handsome stallion

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Kymber Hawke

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22 comments

courtleymanor August 13, 2024 - 5:44 pm

This should be set to music and made into a song!

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Kymber Hawke August 13, 2024 - 5:46 pm

Wow! That is a huge compliment, thank you. 🙂 🌺🩷

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Jowita July 28, 2021 - 9:25 am

It’s really a beautiful poem. Thank you so much for sharing it. I believe it is somewhat personal to you, too.

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Kymber July 28, 2021 - 9:50 am

Thank you, Jowita. It is definitely personal to me. I’m so glad you liked it.

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joliesattic March 17, 2020 - 1:51 am

Too bad there isn’t a “love” button.

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Kymber March 18, 2020 - 7:01 pm

Thank you so much, Jo ❤️❤️

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Invisibly Me March 13, 2020 - 12:57 pm

I can feel the sense of freedom & triumph in leaving the jack-ass – very nicely written! xx

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Kymber March 13, 2020 - 1:24 pm

LOL Thank you so much, Caz. xo

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audreyfld March 12, 2020 - 10:57 am

It was sad and then turned very hopeful. 😊

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Kymber March 12, 2020 - 12:10 pm

Awww thank you, Audrey. 🙂

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Hyperion March 12, 2020 - 10:30 am

Hi Kymber! This was quite poignant but in it is a message of hope and overcoming one’s past. I love this poem. I can feel the positive energy in it. Plus that bit of humor in the end left me with a big smile.

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Kymber March 12, 2020 - 12:09 pm

Hi there! Thank you so much. I am glad you thought it had a positive vibe because that’s how I intended it. 😀 I’m also glad I could leave you with a smile.

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Hyperion March 12, 2020 - 2:26 pm

You are always a positive ray of light, Kymber, even when the Sims are deadlocked in nefarious activities, you remain in the light. That’s inspiring because my inner dark gothic steampunk vampire used to be afraid of the light. But, I’m finding I like happy and positive interactions. 🧛🏻‍♂️🌞

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Kymber March 12, 2020 - 2:58 pm

Why thank you so much for saying this. Sometimes I’m also bothered by my inner dark gothic steampunk vampire. But positive and happy is much better. 🧛🏻‍♂️🌞

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Hyperion March 12, 2020 - 3:01 pm

LOL 😆 we vampires do brighten each other’s day. 🧛‍♀️🧛🏻‍♂️🐈

Kymber March 12, 2020 - 3:29 pm

😀 I would say that is 100% correct.

Hyperion March 12, 2020 - 7:00 pm

I personally think INFJ vampires and vampiresses are the best.

Kymber March 12, 2020 - 7:14 pm

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, me, too! 😀

Hyperion March 12, 2020 - 7:17 pm

Muwaaa haaa haaaaa! Great INFJ minds do think alike. 😎😎

Kymber March 12, 2020 - 7:58 pm

Always!! 😀 😀

bmitjessesue March 12, 2020 - 10:22 am

I didn’t know you were writing this for the site!! I still love it, especially the ending of course!

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Kymber March 12, 2020 - 12:08 pm

LOL Thanks, Bee. 😀

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