On a knoll where whispers of wheat dance, she gazes down, a tapestry of dust and dreams, her little house clings to the earth like hope, wooden bones adorned with the laughter of sun.
In the stillness, shadows weave stories of toil, each creak of the floor, a heartbeat of the past, where every stone remembers the weight of her heart, and the plains stretch out, a canvas of untamed wonder.
Kymber, your chosen title of “Untamed Wonder” offers two words that can definitely complement each other. Your verses offer a theme that takes me to the eastern plains of Montana were countless homesteaders came, tried, gave up, and left. Only distant memories remain anymore.
This is a strong heartfelt poem Kymber. I liked the line ‘In the stillness, shadows weave stories of toil,’
Excellent work on your site too, really feeling the blue vibes of color.it is coming alive nicely.
Exquisite and delightful! I became the wheat dancing in the breeze, the house clinging to the earth like hope, her dreams, memories, and the untamed wonder of it all!
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Beautiful as the heart from which it flows, your poetry is a pleasure to read, dear Kymber ~ thank you for sharing 💗
Thank you so much, Phil. You are so kind, and I appreciate you. 🩷🌸
It’s mutual, my friend ~ thanks so much 💕🌷
This was lovely, Kymber.
Thank you so much, Nigel. I appreciate your kind words.
You’re welcome
Kymber, your chosen title of “Untamed Wonder” offers two words that can definitely complement each other. Your verses offer a theme that takes me to the eastern plains of Montana were countless homesteaders came, tried, gave up, and left. Only distant memories remain anymore.
Thank you so much for your kind words. I was thinking of Montana when I wrote it, so that’s neat that you pictured that. 🙂
Kymber, thank you for sharing back. I was writing this morning, and images of Montana offered a window of wonders.
It’s a wonderful place, that big sky country.🌺
So nostalgic and beautiful, Kymber ❤️ lovely as always! 😊 this image reminds me of Ireland a bit. So pretty! 😍
Thank you so much, Laura! ❤️ I’m glad you like it and that it feels nostalgic to you.🌼🌷
I was immediately transported to Wuthering Heights.
That’s awesome, KC! Thank you so much!
So beautifully written, Kymber. Most splendid indeed! 👏👏👏
Thank you, Kevin. Your picture really inspired me! 🙂
So beautiful
Thank you, Joanne. I really appreciate it. ♥️
What a nice poetic response to this prompt KymberNoodle! Beautiful! 👏🏼🥰🙏🏼
Thank you, ChickiePie! ♥️♥️ You are so sweet.
You are so very welcome my dear. Hugs and smooches! 🥰💖😘
Hugs and smooches to you, too! ❤️🌼🌷
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It is a beautiful poem that goes very well with Kevin’s beautiful picture
Thank you, Thomas. You are so kind.
Your poem suits the image perfectly and paints a beautiful mental picture as well! 👌
Thank you so much, Debbie! You are so kind. ♥️
Such an intriguing poem!
Thank you, Astrid!
This is a strong heartfelt poem Kymber. I liked the line ‘In the stillness, shadows weave stories of toil,’
Excellent work on your site too, really feeling the blue vibes of color.it is coming alive nicely.
Thank you so much, Ernie! I appreciate the kind words about the poem and the site! I’m slowly adding the orange of a cat to the site. lol 😀
If you need/want any images let me know and I will try to help in any way I can.
You have such a kind and generous heart, Ernie. Thank you so much.
each as was
cos it is important
to you
Thank you 🙂
You captured the atmosphere so beautifully, Kymber!
Thank you. I appreciate it. ♥️
So beautiful, Kymber. 💞
Thank you so much! 🙂
My pleasure.
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Very good story for the picture. I could just imagine the old pioneer days when people were settling the prairie lands and the hardships they faced. 🙂
Thank you so much. That means a lot to me. ♥️
Such beautiful poetry!
Thank you, Kim. ♥️
Exquisite and delightful! I became the wheat dancing in the breeze, the house clinging to the earth like hope, her dreams, memories, and the untamed wonder of it all!
What a lovely comment, thank you so much. ♥️
Oh my, Kymber! This is SO good! This line: “her little house clings to the earth like hope,” is such an expressive and poetic line. Way to go!
Thank you so much, Jan! I’m so glad you like it! ♥️♥️
Beautiful ♥️
Thank you so much, Caleb!
Beautifully written, and the ending is simply fantastic.👏👏
Thank you so much. I’m so glad you like it! ♥️
You’re very welcome! Yes, I did enjoy it.
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