Tattered
In the quiet of twilight,
a tattered flag flutters in the breeze,
the symbol of a nation torn apart,
cries that never cease.
The echoes of the cannons
still reverberate in the ground,
where young souls were claimed
by war’s relentless sound.
Through the darkness of conflict,
a hero’s heart stands tall,
lessons of courage and loss
etched upon history’s wall.
© 2024 Kymber Hawke, for booomcha.com
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Written in response to Kevin’s NTT:
YAY to putting out two NTT’s this week! I don’t think I’ve ever done that. lol This poem is in response to Kevin’s No Theme Thursday: The Return. I was so inspired by the pictures! Maybe you’d like to try, too! 🙂
Thank you so much for reading, liking, lurking, and commenting! You are important!
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51 comments
Well said Kymber. It is always good to imagine what someone (a soldier, perhaps) must be going through. I am sure many/most would rather be anywhere else, but battle. War takes a heavy toll. Have a great evening. Allan
Thank you for your insightful words, Allan. I hope you’re having a great weekend thus far. 🌺
So moving. It’s brave to write this way, too, imagining and empathizing with the fates of others.
Thank you so much, Stephanie. Your words mean a lot to me. 🌺🩷
Thank a veteran today. There is nothing more humbling, more humanitarian. These brave souls gave up their lives so we can live as we do. Yet, we are being made to forget.
This is so true. And important. Thank you for your wise words.
Kymber, this poem made me tear up. So powerful.
Thank you so much! I’m glad it resonated with you. I appreciate your kind words. 🌺🩷
A powerful poem, I thought especially so with how the “echoes of the cannons” feels to be also echoed in the thudding of the hero’s heart. A commemorating of all those who were lost.
Thank you, Dave. I’m so glad this poem resonated with you. Your comment is lovely.
That’s beautiful, Kymber!
Thank you, Dawn. 🌺🩷
This poem beautifully captures the enduring pain of war and the bravery of those who fought. The imagery and emotion are powerful and moving.
I have zero knowledge in poetry still I loved the way you wrote.
Have a great weekdays ahead!
Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words. 🌺 You have a great week ahead, too! 🙂
You are welcome, Kymber Hawke.
May we never forget those who died for this country. A fantastic poem, Kymber.
Yes, true. Thank you so much, Jan. I’m so glad you liked it. 🌺🩷
Very good poetry, Kymber, and timely with 4th of July and an election that’s likely to be loud.
Thank you, Mary. I hadn’t thought about the timeliness, but yes, I think you’re right. 🌺🩷
Chills, Kymber <3 !!! Powerfully penned !! 🙂
Thank you so much! Your words are so encouraging to me. 🌺🩷
deeply touching and poignant… profound too, Kymber.
you captured the image beautifully 🤍
Wow, thank you so much, Destiny. I’m so glad you like it. 🌺🩷
always a pleasure 🤍
Very deep, really tugs at the heart Kymber, nice job!
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your encouraging words. 🌺🩷
What a poem this is! Well done. It actually draws my attention more to what is currently happening in Ukraine, where almost all the men in the country are out defending the pride of their nation. Bless you for sharing this.
It’s truly heartbreaking to see the situation in Ukraine unfold, with so many lives being lost and families torn apart. The bravery and resilience of the Ukrainian people in the face of such adversity is truly inspiring.
Thank you so much. And I agree with you completely. It is definitely inspiring to see how the Ukrainian people have responded to this horrible thing they face. I pray for them, especially as I watch the news and hear reports of what is happening. You said “…truly heartbreaking…” and you are right.
Thank you again. I really appreciate your feedback and what this means for you. 🌺
It’s a beautiful and poignant poem.
Thank you, Thomas. That means a lot to me. 🌺
A wonderful poem, Kymber.
Thank you, Robbie. I’m so thrilled you liked it. 🌺🩷
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How beautiful Kymber. დ
Thanks so much, Cindy. 🌺🩷
Nicely done, Kymber. Hugs.
Thank you, Teagan. Hugs right back to ya’. 🌺🩷
This was so wondeful! Very touching, my favorite poem yet!
Thank you so much. Your words are so appreciated and encouraging. 🌺🩷
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Thank you, Lorrie! 🌺🩷
Very haunting and emotive writing, Kymber ❤️🩹
Thank you, Laura. I appreciate how encouraging you are. 🌺🩷
Absolutely magnificent Kymber! Beautiful!! 👏👏👏
Thank you, Kevin, and thank you for the picture to use! 🌺🩷
My pleasure 😊
There’s a lot of pride in that poem and story.
I think so, too. Thank you, Jacqui! 🌺
Absolutely Beautiful. Love It
Thank you so much, Willie! I appreciate your kind words! 🌺
You are very welcome