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Beautiful, skittish
a variety of birds
black-throated sparrow
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Welcome to my first attempt at writing a Haiku. I love reading this type of poetry, so I thought I would try it. I hope you like it.
Image by Kurt Bouda from Pixabay
27 comments
A beautiful poem with a lovely, lovely photo🌺
Thank you so much, Jean. I appreciate your kind words. 🌺
Your welcome, have a great day 🌺
You, too, my friend! 🌺
Oh that was beautiful🌺 thank my dear friend 😊🌺
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Haiku are fun experiments. If I say your haiku is for the birds, it is a compliment. Happy Monday Kymber. Allan
I enjoyed your take on writing a Haiku. I have written several, so I hope you will stay with it.
Thank you so much. 🙂 I found it really hard to do. Hopefully, though, as I write more of them, it will come a bit easier to me.
I bet your Haikus are really nice. 🙂
Sweet – as an avid bird watcher this hits me in the heart <3
Thank you so much, Lisa. ❤❤
Very sweet, I definitely like it! Writing a haiku (from what I can vaguely recall from school) can be surprisingly difficult. Do you think you’ll try some more? xx
Thanks so much, Caz. xo
That’s a good question. This one took me a long time as I kept changing words and counting syllables. lol I think I would like to try again, though.
Thank you for sharing, you did great!!… just let your fingers do the walking and heart do the talking!!… 🙂
Until we meet again..
May the love that you give
Always return to you,
That family and friends are many
And always remain true,
May your mind only know peace
No suffering or strife,
May your spirit only know love and happiness
On your journey through life.
(Larry “Dutch” Woller)
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your encouragement! xo
Very cute. 🙂
Thank you 🙂
You are so clever! Well done,
Thank you so much. 🙂
You did great! You’ve caught the essence of these beautiful little birds perfectly <3
Thank you so much, Jacquie. ❤❤
What a great start, Kymber!
Thank you, Jacqui! 🙂
That was your first attempt? Just beautiful, Kymber. You got this.
I’d dabbled, I guess you could say but this is the first one that ever seemed to come together. Thank you so much for your encouragement. 🙂
I enjoyed it!
Thank you 🙂