Chapter 1.23: Dear Diary, Life & Death

Content Warning: This chapter contains images which may be disturbing to some.

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2016-05-07T10:00:15+00:00

67 Comments

  1. bmitjessesue May 7, 2016 at 10:03 am - Reply

    Looks so awesome. I love the fire in the car! Leo! Jilly! Nooooo! Oh the story is going to get soooo good from this point on!

    • RosemaryMarie May 7, 2016 at 10:24 am - Reply

      Thank you, Jesse. I worked on this chapter for a long time and it’s been ready for several weeks now. Thanks for your positive feedback! πŸ™‚

  2. adwilson1991 May 7, 2016 at 11:01 am - Reply

    Jilly! Leo! **gasp**

    • RosemaryMarie May 7, 2016 at 5:33 pm - Reply

      Thank you for reading and commenting, Addy! πŸ™‚

  3. chealsycat May 7, 2016 at 2:28 pm - Reply

    Oh no! So sad! :'(
    Though I love the way you organized the chapter: the police report, the photos – so realistic!

  4. raymondsanti May 7, 2016 at 2:49 pm - Reply

    Oh nooo πŸ™ I hope they’re alright! I love how you presented this chapter though, not very many words needed to make an impact!

    • RosemaryMarie May 7, 2016 at 5:34 pm - Reply

      Thank you very much for your feedback! πŸ™‚

  5. Marjorie Watts May 7, 2016 at 3:18 pm - Reply

    That was not kind!!! However, it was a great chapter, and the use of a police report was very original, and a unique way to do it! Now, back to my box of tissues. =(

    • RosemaryMarie May 7, 2016 at 5:35 pm - Reply

      I know it wasn’t nice. πŸ™ Thank you, though, for reading and commenting, though. I’m sorry about the tissues. πŸ™‚

  6. dandylion240 May 7, 2016 at 3:50 pm - Reply

    No Jilly….Leo this is awful! No matter who survived their life is never going to be the same again.😰

    • RosemaryMarie May 7, 2016 at 5:35 pm - Reply

      You are so right! Thank you very much for reading and leaving feedback. πŸ™‚

  7. Violincat May 7, 2016 at 4:02 pm - Reply

    Oh no! Whoever survives is going to have a really hard time without the other.

    • RosemaryMarie May 7, 2016 at 5:37 pm - Reply

      You are very right about that! Thank you so much for coming by and commenting, too. πŸ™‚

  8. zaragrowingup May 7, 2016 at 4:25 pm - Reply

    Ah, this is so intense! So sad but I love it!

    • RosemaryMarie May 7, 2016 at 5:38 pm - Reply

      Thank you! πŸ™‚ I appreciate your feedback!

  9. Lila Remonn May 7, 2016 at 4:42 pm - Reply

    Holy crap what just happened? That was so intense (yet clever how you did the fire and no words)… arghhhh I’m not sure exactly what happened but did Leo die??????
    Question marks! This is so sad….

    • RosemaryMarie May 7, 2016 at 5:39 pm - Reply

      Thank you, Lila! I know it’s sad. I’m sorry. πŸ™ Thank you, though, for reading and commenting. πŸ™‚

  10. Michele May 7, 2016 at 7:08 pm - Reply

    Well done! (I’m sorry but I don’t recognize the two victims!)

    • RosemaryMarie May 7, 2016 at 7:51 pm - Reply

      Hi, Michele. It’s okay; Leo and Jilly were in the accident. πŸ™‚ Thank you for coming by! πŸ™‚

  11. ixot May 8, 2016 at 1:00 pm - Reply

    OMG NO!!! I don’t want to lose either of the twins, and they were so attached to each other!
    I love how you made a police report, a little fire gif and everything though.

    • RosemaryMarie May 9, 2016 at 6:32 am - Reply

      I know; it’s a terrible thing. :'( Thank you for your kind words. πŸ™‚

  12. lisabeesims May 8, 2016 at 1:24 pm - Reply

    πŸ™ soo sad

  13. Kater Creation May 9, 2016 at 12:16 pm - Reply

    πŸ™ What?!?! O_o I’m speechless….

  14. Echo Weaver May 11, 2016 at 10:30 pm - Reply

    And now I’m caught up. I’m kind of glad I didn’t have to wait for all the foreshadowing to be resolved. Woo. This was intense.
    You even added animated fire. Impressive.

    • RosemaryMarie May 12, 2016 at 10:45 am - Reply

      I’m so glad you’re caught up! Thank you so much for reading! πŸ™‚

  15. Senna May 15, 2016 at 2:45 pm - Reply

    It took me a while to see the fire was moving in that one picture. o.O

  16. cathytea August 10, 2016 at 11:53 am - Reply

    No! I’m so scared and already sad…

    • RosemaryMarie August 10, 2016 at 8:31 pm - Reply

      Thank you…. I’m sorry to have done that to you. πŸ™‚

      • cathytea August 10, 2016 at 8:40 pm - Reply

        Oh… that’s a reader’s hazard, right? It’s just that I fell in love with ****… ah. Now I’m interested to see how the family deals with the loss.

        • RosemaryMarie August 10, 2016 at 8:43 pm - Reply

          There’s quite a hole in the family for some time, I’m afraid. πŸ™‚ Thank you again.

  17. Jes2G September 13, 2016 at 9:56 pm - Reply

    Wait… WAIT!! What?! *clicks next chapter*

  18. thymelesslegacies September 22, 2016 at 3:52 pm - Reply

    OMG NO *am actually crying* I don’t know who dies but I’m heartbroken </3

    • RosemaryMarie October 4, 2016 at 3:11 pm - Reply

      I’m so sorry that I missed your comment. And I’m sorry you were heartbroken. :'( <3

  19. […] As you may have guessed, if you are a regular reader of Noble Doubt, this is a companion of Chapter 1.23 in which the main characters of that story, Leo and Jilly, are in an accident. I thought it would […]

  20. […] Note: To reread the entry of the accident: Click Here. To reread the chapter with the funeral: Click […]

  21. velikosmijanje December 18, 2016 at 5:07 am - Reply

    I already know who survives but still it is awful and heartbreaking… Poor Memphis πŸ™ and her whole family…

    • RosemaryMarie December 18, 2016 at 12:10 pm - Reply

      Thank you πŸ™‚ I felt so badly for them all, too. It took them a while to recover from this.

  22. freja64 January 21, 2017 at 11:07 am - Reply

    OMG…

  23. lilsapphire February 4, 2017 at 10:22 pm - Reply

    cries

  24. hafuhga February 23, 2017 at 10:12 am - Reply

    Nooooo!

  25. Rosie May 31, 2017 at 1:49 am - Reply

    Noooooooooooooooooooooooo! T__T

  26. sensationaltragedy June 24, 2017 at 8:46 pm - Reply

    OH MY GOSH! You can’t do this to me! I’m invested especially after Jilly did her scrapbook. Was this your plan all along; to do the scrapbook and then show this? Was this foreshadowing? My little heart can’t take this! I’m distraught!

    • RosemaryMarie June 25, 2017 at 12:21 pm - Reply

      I’m so sorry to have distressed you so. :O πŸ™‚ I devised this plan when the sim in question became glitched.

      • sensationaltragedy June 25, 2017 at 5:18 pm - Reply

        Ah okay, so that’s what happened. Glad you didn’t kill her because you got tired of having her in the family.

        • RosemaryMarie June 26, 2017 at 11:04 am - Reply

          Oh no, I loved that character. πŸ™‚ I thought about re-adding them to the game, but then they would have lost the family connections, so …. this. lol :O

  27. semprevivasims3 July 6, 2017 at 10:48 am - Reply

    What??!!! Noooo!!! 😭 That is heartbreaking (but I loved what you did with the photos and the police report)!

    • RosemaryMarie July 6, 2017 at 11:09 am - Reply

      Thank you. I’m sorry it had to happen. :'( I’m still sad about it.

  28. MM Simmerific August 17, 2017 at 1:42 am - Reply

    As a reader, I’m like, “Wait… What?! Oh no!!! This is mortifying!”
    As a simmer/storyteller, I’m like, “Whoa. Nice shots! Great work!”

    • RosemaryMarie August 17, 2017 at 9:12 am - Reply

      Thank you. πŸ™‚ It took a long time to set this up and figure it out. It’s so nice when it’s appreciated. πŸ™‚ And yes, also very mortifying! :O

      • MM Simmerific August 18, 2017 at 1:55 am - Reply

        Can’t appreciate it enough! It’s awesome.

  29. snazzle August 24, 2017 at 5:00 pm - Reply

    Man.. I knew this was coming (I found your blog after reading Stories by Bee), but that doesn’t make this any easier. *sniff*

    • RosemaryMarie August 24, 2017 at 5:42 pm - Reply

      Awwww…. I love how Bee incorporated my characters into her story. <3 I know this was difficult to see.

  30. amyqueen December 8, 2017 at 8:53 pm - Reply

    Oh no, everything was going so well :'( I love how you did the police repot and shots, everything looked so great but heartbreaking at the same time </3 Losing a sibling is hard, but losing a twin will be infinitely more so. I'm expecting a very sad next chapter…

    • RosemaryMarie December 9, 2017 at 7:18 am - Reply

      Thank you. This took me weeks to decide what to do with it all. And I was so scared to even post it. lol

  31. oshizu584 March 27, 2018 at 2:37 pm - Reply

    Awwwww, no! As soon as the ages were reported, I knew who were in the truck. πŸ™
    I’ve read all the comments and salute you for a fantastic narrative solution for a tragically glitched sim.

    On a lighter note, you made me google a gram-to-oz converter which taught me that 7 grams is a 1/4 ounce, strictly out of medical curiosity, of course. *cheesy grin

    • RosemaryMarie March 28, 2018 at 10:27 am - Reply

      Thank you so much for your kind words. It was one of those things where I had to make a tough decision. πŸ™

      I’m grinning cheesily along with you. lol πŸ˜€

  32. azzywoods June 9, 2018 at 5:27 am - Reply

    Oh…no. This is gonna be so hard on everyone.

    • Kymber June 9, 2018 at 6:51 am - Reply

      You’ve got that right. πŸ™

  33. sweetnightingale September 12, 2018 at 1:49 pm - Reply

    Oh noooo! My heart! My heart!!! This isn’t good, not good st all!

    I will say, though, that this looks awesome! I can see that a lot of work went into this. I would love to know how you went about putting this together. I wouldn’t even know the first steps in doing something like this.

    • Kymber September 12, 2018 at 2:07 pm - Reply

      Thank you πŸ™‚ I scoured everywhere looking for CC blood, corpses, a crashed car, etc. Then, I used a lot of moveobject on. lol Oh, and poses, too. πŸ˜€

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Hi, my name is Kymber but you may know me by my pseudonym, Rosemary Castevet. I’m an author, simmer, Registered Nurse, Judy Garland devoteeΒ and horror buff. Did I mention I’m currently owned by Cesare the cat? On top of all of that, I’m a redheaded INFJ who is also a vegan.

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