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gleaming break of day
a beautiful, small girl frowns
betrayed by the snow
©2022 Kymber L. Hawke
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I hope, wherever you are, the sun shines brightly, if not in the true weather, then in your heart. ❤️
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32 comments
so beautiful! I am imagining that little girl now! 🥰🥰
That’s wonderful! Thank you! 💗🌺
Haiku are my favourite poetry style Kymber. A nice creation. Happy Tuesday. Allan
I’m so happy to hear that, Allan. Happy Wednesday and Thursday, too! 😊
Lovely!
Thank you, Jan!
Lovely poem, Kymber. I think many deserve an early spring. 🌷
Thank you, Eugi. I agree 💯%!
You’re welcome, Kymber.
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Lovely seasonal poem! 💖 And most of us have had enough of snow, now. 😝
Right on, Debbie! Thank you so much. 🩷🌸
Love this, Kymber. 💖
Thank you so much. 🩷🌸
My pleasure. ❤️
Just lovely
Thank you, Jo-Anne.
This is a delicately beautiful piece, quiet yet emotionally vivid. In just a few lines, you paint a scene that feels both visual and tenderly human. The contrast between the “gleaming break of day” and the small girl’s frown is especially striking — it captures that fleeting childhood moment when nature’s beauty and a child’s expectations don’t quite align. That subtle note of “betrayed by the snow” is wonderful; it suggests.
Thank you so much, Vijay. Your words are very kind. 🌸🌸
I imagine snow becomes tiresome even for the young. I’ve never liked cold.
I hear you on that, Robbie. And I think you’re right. ☺️
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She’s learning early how sneaky snow can be 😊 Maggie
LOL She sure is! Thank you, Maggie. 😀
Beautiful peaceful haiku, Kymber. Lovely photo! Happy Sunday!
Thank you, Suzette! Happy Sunday!
Thanks Kymber!
My pleasure, my friend.
come the dawn
brush off sleepy ennui
with the sun
Beautiful! Thank you!
Lovely words, Kymber ❤️
Thank you so much, Esther. <3