You said I regret leaving you
But you couldn’t be more wrong
Because the moment I was free of you
My heart filled with song
A feeling washed over me
You could say it was relief
When I no longer had to please you
Or care what you think
Leaving was the best thing
And now I’m really smiling
Because I traded in the jack-ass
For a strong, and handsome stallion
©2020 booomcha.com
Kymber Hawke
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This should be set to music and made into a song!
Wow! That is a huge compliment, thank you. 🙂 🌺🩷
It’s really a beautiful poem. Thank you so much for sharing it. I believe it is somewhat personal to you, too.
Thank you, Jowita. It is definitely personal to me. I’m so glad you liked it.
Too bad there isn’t a “love” button.
Thank you so much, Jo ❤️❤️
I can feel the sense of freedom & triumph in leaving the jack-ass – very nicely written! xx
LOL Thank you so much, Caz. xo
It was sad and then turned very hopeful. 😊
Awww thank you, Audrey. 🙂
Hi Kymber! This was quite poignant but in it is a message of hope and overcoming one’s past. I love this poem. I can feel the positive energy in it. Plus that bit of humor in the end left me with a big smile.
Hi there! Thank you so much. I am glad you thought it had a positive vibe because that’s how I intended it. 😀 I’m also glad I could leave you with a smile.
You are always a positive ray of light, Kymber, even when the Sims are deadlocked in nefarious activities, you remain in the light. That’s inspiring because my inner dark gothic steampunk vampire used to be afraid of the light. But, I’m finding I like happy and positive interactions. 🧛🏻♂️🌞
Why thank you so much for saying this. Sometimes I’m also bothered by my inner dark gothic steampunk vampire. But positive and happy is much better. 🧛🏻♂️🌞
LOL 😆 we vampires do brighten each other’s day. 🧛♀️🧛🏻♂️🐈
😀 I would say that is 100% correct.
I personally think INFJ vampires and vampiresses are the best.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, me, too! 😀
Muwaaa haaa haaaaa! Great INFJ minds do think alike. 😎😎
Always!! 😀 😀
I didn’t know you were writing this for the site!! I still love it, especially the ending of course!
LOL Thanks, Bee. 😀