They danced together yet alone
With bruises on her face
And hatred in his pace
It was love that could not be regrown
The romance ended with a moan
She tried to make it last
But they were both miscast
They danced together yet alone
©2017 booomcha.com
Kymber Hawke
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I have thought about this poem many times.. ‘She tried to make it last’ oh how much I appreciate this girl🌺
Thank you, Jean. I haven’t read this one in a very long time. 🌺 I really appreciate your encouragement!
This one makes many thinking, at least should make ”They danced together yet alone”…
Well done
Powerful and well done!
Thank you so much, Cindy. xo
Poignant and very sad. Well done.
Thank you so much, Rowena.
Very powerful!!
Thank you very much. 🙂
🙂
Welcome.💕💕❤
Old post but the essence is still fresh. Loved reading it.👌
Thank you so much. I appreciate it. 🙂
Oh god!!! I remember 3rd of may,2016 when we danced together for the last time, it was really painful leaving you and New York!!!
Things can happen with anyone!! But I don’t want people to suffer from it!!
Wonderful poem 😢
Thank you very much.
Your most welcome!!!
Impressive and visual. Thank you
Thank you so very much.
Interesting. I want to know more.
Thank you. 🙂 That’s a good point.
Sad but beautiful!
Thank you so much. 🙂
Salsa when u sad or sing. Me buy a new lamp evry time. Yea this blog is unik
Thank you so much 🙂
Well done but sad.
Thank you, Jolie.
Sounds like a tango… Very intense poem.
Thank you very much. <3
Beautiful!
Thank you so much 🙂
Time to add poet to your resume!! It is so sad, and also wonderful! ♥
Thank you, Marj. <3
Great poem 🙂
Thank you, Jowita. 🙂